The charts below show the changes in the proportion of energy produced from different resources in a country in 1985 and 2003.

The charts below show the changes in the proportion of energy produced from different resources in a country in 1985 and 2003.
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Two pie charts depict the rate of energy production that was earned from five main different resources, between 1985 and 2003. The
proportion
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of oil took half
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resources in 1985 and it fell to nearly 40% in 2003. Nuclear power had the same fashion as oil when the
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of that energy plummeted by approximately 15%. The only resource that was unchanged during that period was hydro, 8%. The ratio of other renewable resources increased slightly from 1% to 4%.
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, there were two increases in statistics for two types of energy: natural gas and coal. In 2003, the percentage of coal rose almost 4 times equal to the one in 1985, 22%.
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, there was a 10% up in the
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of natural gas, from 13% to 23%. In general, the figure for oil took the largest part in total and the
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of hydro gained the least.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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