Some people say that the best way to improve the overall general health of the public is to offer more sports facilities. Others say that this would have little effect and other measure are necessary to improve public health. Discuss both views.
Health is wealth and measures for its betterment should be taken at both
government
's level as well as
the individual's level. It has always been a matter of debate that offering more sports
centres is the most appropriate method to improve the overall
fitness of society while
others are of the opinion that it will have little influence on the improvement of the general health of people
. The upcoming paragraphs will discuss both mindsets before coming to a conclusion.
To begin
with the argument of more and more sports
complexes, it is imperative for the government
to implement this
idea for the well-being of society as in this
sedentary lifestyle, people
always look forward to such
options where they can spend some leisure time or play sports
. For example
, research conducted by the Health Department of India shows that cities with more sports
complexes get fewer complaints of illness. Besides
, it can be a boon for those who are interested in sports
and want to take up their favourite sport as a career option.
On the contrary
, another set of people
consider the trend of fast food
and engineered food
as the main reason for detrimental life and think that banning or imposing more taxes on such
meals helps in a better way. Additionally
, educating individuals about limiting the consumption of sugary drinks and food
with a high level of fat can be a great initiative by the government
. To illustrate, I would like to mention an article that says that in Asia, people
consume less fast food
which makes it a country with the least cases of obesity and cardiac diseases.
To conclude
, I would say that a healthy lifestyle is a blend of physical exercise and dietary substances. None of them can be ignored; hence
the government
of a country should give equal importance to both.Submitted by kaurmamta3 on
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