some people feel that boarding schools are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides and reach a conclusion

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In recent times boarding
schools
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are becoming popular among
parents
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, it's
also
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been
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debated
debited
a lot by
parents
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wether
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whether
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the boarding
schools
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are
advantegious
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advantageous
for children or
causes
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cause
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more problems than
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benefits
. Here are some reasons that might help to get to a conclusion. Some people go with boarding
schools
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because they think their child will be
deciplined
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disciplined
, will learn to make decisions on their own, and will be better exposed to the world. For
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example
, a parent who are not able to give time towards the development of their kid
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tight work schedules
are
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the ones who are
benifited
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benefited
for
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from
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these kind
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these kinds
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of
schools
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.
On the other
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many people don't support the idea of boarding
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because they
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believe
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belive
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believe
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that keeping children away
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from
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their
parents
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is having plenty of negative effects rather than
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benefits
.
This
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can be better explained with an example of a kid who is in Gurukul Boarding School suffering
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from
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homesickness, bullying and mental instability. We cannot conclude
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whether
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boarding
schools
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are a good option or not. Because it has
it's
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its
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own
possitive
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positive
and negative effects on a child. It totally depends on the mental strength of the kid and the situation of the
parents
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or guardian to decide
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whether
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its
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it
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is good or bad.
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