The table below give information about Favorite Pastimes in different countries.
This
table depicts information about favourite pastimes in eight various nations. It is clear from the graph that United States residents can see them in all pastimes with high numbers.
According to
what is shown, People in Japan prefer to reading only and the number of it exactly 62, Also
France, and England favour reading, hobbies, and music only, So reading comes first with 30 comes after hobbies, and the last
one is music. On
other Change preposition
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words
The United States, Australia, Canada, Korea, and China would rather all amusements, And Add a comma
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it is clear that
television had massive rates in these countries.
To sum up
, we could say that the USA, Australia, Canada, Korea, and China have the highest numbers of favourite pastimes whereas
other nations.Submitted by jqsnber4 on
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