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in some countries, more and more people are becoming intrested in finding out about the history of th house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

#countries #people #history #house #research
In many nations, many
people
 are starting to show
intrest
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interest
 in the history of
their
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 houses and buildings where they live.
Well
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 there are many
wasy
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ways
 in which an individual can look up
for
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they
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the
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past
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 information
of
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about
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 their house because there can be many
reason
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 to do so, like nationalism linked to
the
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architecture. There
are
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variouse
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various
 reason for why a person is curious about a
concrecte
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concrete
 and
wodden
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wooden
 structure.
One
 of the reason is that the history, tale, and stories of many countries is linked to
its
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 architecture of it beautiful structures.
One
 great example of
this
 is India and its rich past with
disenty
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dignity
 and kingdom states which
is
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are
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 presented in the form of beautiful monuments, homes and towers engraved with astounding
craftman-ship
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craftsmanship
craftmanship
 like
Taj-Mahal
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Taj Mahal
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, Mysore Palace, and homes in Kashmir.
These
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There
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is
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are
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 just
one
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for
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of
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wht
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what
why
people
 are curious
.
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about.
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This
 is just the tip of the
ice-berg
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iceberg
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, there are so many houses and building which represents so much about their nation.
People
 are just
one
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knowing
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abut
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about
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 the wonders
about
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of
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 their
home
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. There are many
people
 who found out that their houses were built so long ago, trapping the essence of that era. My friend found out that his house was constructed in
early
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 eighteen hundreds and
as
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was
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 decorated with hand-crafted wood by just reading some books and searching about the
contruction
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construction
 process of
past
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the past
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 on
Google
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the Google
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 search engine. So, there are multiple reasons and
wasy
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ways
 to look up and research
about
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a house because
its
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it's
it is
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 all connected with the history of a country.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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