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Some people think that private schools have many advantages while others think there have many drawbacks for the community. Discuss both sides and give an opinion

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Some say that
schools
 run by private persons are more beneficial to people
while
 many argue
otherwise
. Despite the benefit of quality
education
 being imparted by
institutions
 run for profit, I am of the opinion that
class
discrimination
 is a far more serious disadvantage for society. On the one hand, one of the main positives of private
schools
 is that their
education
 is considered quality
education
. Since these
institutions
 adopt modern techniques and employ highly educated teachers at comparatively high salaries, their standards of knowledge and communication techniques are thought by many as better when compared with the
schools
 run under
auspices
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 of the government.
For example
, a significant majority of the middle
class
 in Pakistan want to send their children to private
schools
 because of the impression that the
education
 standards of private
institutions
 are higher than public
schools
.
However
, I think that
this
 impression is not well founded, and even the government
schools
 are providing very good quality
education
, but concerns regarding
class
discrimination
 in private
schools
 seem genuine.
On the other hand
, there is a significant majority of people who opine that
class
discrimination
 is the most important downside of private
schools
.
That is
 to say that a great many lower-
class
 families are not given admission in these for-profit
institutions
 and even if someone from a poor family gets entry into these high-
class
schools
, the students from the elite
class
 look askance at the middle-
class
 students,
thus
 imbuing a sense of inferiority in them.
For instance
, in a recent event, which took place in an elite private school
of
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 Lahore, three girls from a rich family beat a poor girl because she refused to bow and accede to
unlawful
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 demands of those girls.
Therefore
, I think that
this
class
 differentiation is not helpful for the community as a whole. In conclusion,
although
 private
schools
 are considered to be providing high-quality
education
, in my estimation,
discrimination
 between students on basis of the
class
 has far significant negative consequences for society.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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