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Many businesses in the world today are run by family members. Do the advantages of family-run businesses outweigh the disadvantages. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experiences or knowledge

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Nowadays, the development of technology alters our
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 style.
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 in the previous centuries, most careers were run by fathers and families' children worked beside their fathers, Now we can not see much more family-run businesses. In
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 essay, the merits and demerits of
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 type of
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 will be discussed. We are born in families and we start to know each other in the family since childhood. To clarify, we get
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 our family members for many years.
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 feature can make fast progress in our vocation when we use the family environment as a
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.
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, being with a family supplies less stress and nervousness to staff and workers.
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, in
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 workplaces, we have more flexibility in
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 time.
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, All these factors give workers high job satisfaction.
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, our neighbour and his son have a restaurant and they
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 together for 25 years. Not only do they make good money but
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 both of them have a positive vision of each other.
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 unity of the family environment and the
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 has some negative points. To illustrate, individuals may have some issues at
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 but they can leave these problems in their
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 and come back every day.
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, in the case of family businesses, these problems are in every single moment of their lives.
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, my brother and his wife started an online shop together. After three years their opposite ideas in
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 lead their lives to vital problems and
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, they divorced. In conclusion, unity of
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 and family atmosphere has merits like high job satisfaction
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 demerits like family disputes.
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, I believe the modern way of careers is the best and it has fewer negative aspects.
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