The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart describes the percentages of the gross domestic product generated from two different components (IT and
service
industry
) in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Generally, the manufacturing of
GDP
increased in both IT and
service
industries, but IT remained higher throughout
this
period. At the beginning of the period, in 1992, the IT
industry
produced slightly over 6
percent
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of
GDP
, which exceeded more than 2
percent
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of the
service
industry
. Over the following four years, until 1996, the levels became more similar, with both components standing between 6 and just over 8
percent
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. IT
industry
remained higher
overall
,
although
it dropped marginally just below 8
percent
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in 1996.
However
, the production rates from the two components were significantly different during the periods around 1998 and 2000. The percentage of the
GDP
from the IT
industry
increased quite sharply to 12% in 1998 and considerably over 16% in 2000,
whereas
the
service
industry
remained the same, increasing to slightly over 8%.
At the end
of the period, the
GDP
manufacturing
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in the IT
industry
was almost twice that of the
service
industry
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • components
  • GDP
  • consumption
  • investment
  • government spending
  • net exports
  • display
  • categories
  • largest
  • increase
  • stable
  • range
  • decline
  • fluctuate
  • gradual
  • positive values
  • negative values
  • overall
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