Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environment problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Many people suggest that the most significant recent environmental issue is the diminishing of plant and animal species.

On the other hand

, others argue that there are more crucial environmental situations. From my point of view, I totally agree with the second opinion. Nowadays, deforestation has been a huge environmental problem and may cause a massive impact on a lot of flora and fauna in both indirect and direct ways.

For example

, people use a ton of threes to process in the paper and pulp industry for their own business and do not consider

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wildlife habitats

such

as koalas, elephants, owls, etc.

Moreover

, some humans

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the violation, they try to hunt animals over the hunting period which probably disturbs an animal's food chain and results in reducing food resources.

Nevertheless

, global warming

according to

a large volume of carbon dioxide emission is far more likely to be an enormous challenge in

this

decade because it affects every species in the whole world.

For instance

,

this

toxic gas can cause air pollution which is the root of carcinogens which can accelerate cancer diseases.

Furthermore

, carbon dioxide breaks the world’s atmosphere

consequently

the problem of climate change. Most creatures died and were nearly extinct from

this

phenomenon

such

as polar bears faced with lacking residence

due to

the north pole’s weather has changed by higher temperatures.

To conclude

, in my point of view, at

this

time other problems especially global warming is more crucial than the loss of species of plants and animals because it has affected and vibrated the whole creatures.

Thus

,

this

situation needs to be solved immediately.