Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environment problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Many people suggest that the most significant recent environmental issue is the diminishing of plant and animal species.
On the other hand
, others argue that there are more crucial environmental situations. From my point of view, I totally agree with the second opinion.
Nowadays, deforestation has been a huge environmental problem and may cause a massive impact on a lot of flora and fauna in both indirect and direct ways. Linking Words
For example
, people use a ton of threes to process in the paper and pulp industry for their own business and do not considerLinking Words
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wildlife habitats Wrong verb form
lacking
such
as koalas, elephants, owls, etc. Linking Words
Moreover
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the violation, they try to hunt animals over the hunting period which probably disturbs an animal's food chain and results in reducing food resources.
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Nevertheless
, global warming Linking Words
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a large volume of carbon dioxide emission is far more likely to be an enormous challenge in Linking Words
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decade because it affects every species in the whole world. Linking Words
For instance
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toxic gas can cause air pollution which is the root of carcinogens which can accelerate cancer diseases. Linking Words
Furthermore
, carbon dioxide breaks the world’s atmosphere Linking Words
consequently
the problem of climate change. Most creatures died and were nearly extinct from Linking Words
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phenomenon Linking Words
such
as polar bears faced with lacking residence Linking Words
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the north pole’s weather has changed by higher temperatures.
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To conclude
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time other problems especially global warming is more crucial than the loss of species of plants and animals because it has affected and vibrated the whole creatures. Linking Words
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situation needs to be solved immediately.Linking Words
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