The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compatisons where relevant.

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The
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illustrates the changes that happened in Ryemouth from 1995 to now.
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, a lot of changes occurred, with building golf and tennis courts and replacing the fish markets and shops with restaurants and apartments. In 1995, there were a farmland and forest park
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the northeast of the
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and next to them divided by the main road,
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housing in the northwest. Below the
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area are located shops.
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, there was a sea with
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fishing port in the middle of it in the southern part of the
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. In the east of the sea, some fish markets arranged. And next to it, there was a cafe and a hotel through the road. Coming to the present day, the farmland and forest park were removed and
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of them, there were built tennis and golf courts. And the number of housing increased and added a new road to the west of the
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. The shops and fish market changed to restaurants and apartments respectively. The fishing port was removed as well;
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, the cafe and hotel remained unchanged in their location. A car park was added next to the hotel.
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