The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphs illustrate the trends in the
rate
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of possession of three electrical
appliances
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, more specifically washing machine, refrigerator and vacuum cleaner, and the number of
hours
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spent doing
housework
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in a certain state from 1920 to 2019. The two charts generally show that,
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the ownership of electrical
appliances
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grew, the
hours
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of
housework
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decreased during
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frame of time. The most striking trend in the first graph is the sharp increase during the period of refrigerator ownership. Indeed, compared to the other two
appliances
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, refrigerators were not used before 1920, but after 20
years
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they were already the most used appliance and by 1980 every household had one.
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, vacuum cleaners too saw a significant rise during the period, starting from a 30%
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in 1920 and reaching 100% in 2000.
On the other hand
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, washing machines, the most used appliance in 1920 with a 40%
rate
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, saw a more variable trend. After 40
years
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of increase, until 1960, when it reached a
rate
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of 70%, their usage saw a decline in the next 20
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and a subsequent new rise, totalling a 75%
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in 2019.
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, the time spent on
housework
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saw a different, downward, trend. Starting from 1920, the average number of
hours
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spent saw a steady decline for 40
years
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, passing from 50 a week to 20 a week, when the decrease started to slow down. In fact, it took 59
years
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to pass from the 20
hours
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of 1960 to the 10
hours
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a week of
housework
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that could be seen in 2019. In conclusion, it can be stated that the two charts saw an inverse relation during the considered period.
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,
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could be caused by the fact that electrical
appliances
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have helped households to minimise the time spent in activities of maintenance of the house.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rate, appliances, hours, housework, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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