Some people feel that petrol cars should be banned. Others feel that we should be allowed to drive petrol cars. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In today’s world, the technologies do not stay in the same place
,
and have been devising new Remove the comma
apply
state of the art
electric Add a hyphen
state-of-the-art
cars
. There is a common belief that cars
which use oil should be banned, however
, others hold the view that traditional cars
should be still exist
and exploit. Both sides of Change the verb form
still exist
this
argument will be analyzed before a reasoned conclusion is drawn.
Firstly
, the prohibition petrol
Change preposition
of petrol
cars
has
strong arguments. It seems clear that they produce exhaust fumes and greenhouse gases Change the verb form
have
such
as dioxide carbon and oxide carbon. According to
statistics, a car can emit around 3 squires meter
of gases per day, Fix the agreement mistake
meters
moreover
, there are more than 1 billion cars
across the Globe. Thus
, a decrease of
traditional vehicles will improve Change preposition
in
quality
of Correct article usage
the quality
airs
in urban centres and weaken the influence Fix the agreement mistake
air
toward
Change preposition
of
the
Global Warming.
On the other extreme, nowadays, Correct article usage
apply
petrol
vehicles are an integral part of human life and countries’ economy. If oil cars
are prohibited at once, it will lead to terrible consequences for economy
and people’s life. Add an article
the economy
For example
, some European countries encountered with
complicated moments Change preposition
apply
such
as the lack of petrol
station
, breakdown of chain supplies and traffic Fix the agreement mistake
stations
congestions
, when there were introduced a lot of electric Fix the agreement mistake
congestion
cars
. So, the petrol
vehicle should not ban completely and it is required gradual politics by entering a brand-new transport.
In summary, both caps of the argument regarding banning and allowing petrol
cars
have strong support. However
, after analyzing both sides it is clear that
the idea of permanent the
prohibition of Correct article usage
apply
the
traditional vehicles cannot be supported. So, the governments should devise Correct article usage
apply
special
layout Correct article usage
a special
how
to introduce new transport facilities and decrease Change preposition
for how
petrol
ones, with gradual
adaptation of Add an article
a gradual
the gradual
economy
and cities’ infrastructure.Correct article usage
the economy
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