The table below shows consumer spending on different items in 5 countries in 2002.

The table below shows consumer spending on different items in 5 countries in 2002.
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The given table illustrates the proportion of natural
expenditure
in
Ireland
, Italy,
Spain
, Sweden and
Turkey
in 3 categories of goods items in 2002.
Overall
, food/drinks/tobacco were the most preferred types of goods,
whereas
leisure/education
were
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spent the least amount of money by citizens. Another point that should
also
be highlighted is that the
expenditure
of
Turkey
in total was the highest in comparison to other
countries
. (The outlay of
Turkey
was generally higher
that
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than
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the other four
countries
) In terms of food/drinks/tobacco,
Turkey
spent the most at 32,14%. The spendings of
Ireland
in
this
category were
also
high (28,91%) compared to Sweden which spent the least (15,77%). The
expenditure
for Italy and
Spain
in
this
category were almost equal at 16,36% and 18,80% respectively. The second most popular group consist of clothing/footwear where Italy topped the list at just 9% of their national
expenditure
as opposed to Sweden, which spent the least at just 5,40%.
Turkey
,
Ireland
and
Spain
have practically
the
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equal percentages at 6,63%, 6,43 and 6,51% respectively. Leisure and education
expenditure
accounted for the least preferred in the table and
Turkey
of all
thecountries
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the countries
countries
spent 4,35%, whilst
Spain
and
Ireland
spent the least amount of money at around 2%. The other two
countries
were around 1% higher at 3,20% and 3,22%. (The national spending in
this
area for the remaining
countries
averaged (усредненный) around 6,5%).
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