A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress. What should people do to stay healthy in your country? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It’s said that living a healthy life entails exercising regularly, eating balanced diets and
also
reducing stress to the
minimal
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.
In addition
to
this
, having the required hours of sleep and staying hydrated remains beneficial to
this
cause as well.
Firstly
, we stay focused on some obvious ways of staying healthy
while
forgetting and neglecting some vital
routine
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. Sleep has been medically proven to be one of the ways to stay fit, not only do we get to relax but
also
it helps to fix some unknown
illness
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illnesses
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in the
body
. Scientifically, our system requires eight hours of sound sleep to be able to function effectively and efficiently.From experience whenever I sleep for a short period of time, I wake up feeling sluggish and sometimes with
slight
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headache
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unlike when I get adequate sleep, I am more active and productive. Another point to consider is hydration, drinking enough water and desisting from the intake of excessive soda helps
metabolism
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of the
body
. Admittedly when we are dehydrated there is a level of inconveniences we put our
body
through, we might begin to have dry throats, coloured urine, constipation and so many more.
Furthermore
, we can likely have headaches which is an indication of an unhealthy state of the
body
.In Nigeria, a lot of people prioritize drinking
of
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soda
to
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drinking
of
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water
due to
this
, so
many
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havoc has been caused to their
body
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bodies
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. The result of
this
has led to diabetes and other chronic illnesses. In conclusion, I admit that exercising, good dieting and reduced stress helps improve our health but we should
also
not neglect
getting
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enough sleep and proper hydration because they all play important roles in our health.
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