The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010.
The given charts indicate the comparison of
household’s
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household
expenses
on
various categories, over six decades between 1950 and 1987.
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in
Overall
, housing and food
accounted for the largest proportion in 1950 and 2010 respectively. Additionally
, there was a reduction in the amount
of money citizens spent on housing and education, Change the quantifier
number
whereas
food
, health care, transportation and other expenditures experienced an increase over the period in question.
In 1950, housing was the primary source of expenses
, at 72,1%; however
, its number decreased remarkably by 50,1% to only 22% which was the second highest in the year 2010. In addition
, expenses
on education also
decreased to 6,3%.
Meanwhile, during the period of 60 years, the figures for food
and other expenditures increased considerably to 34% and 19,2% respectively, which made food
the most spent category in 2010. Moreover
, transportation witnessed a
significant growth from 3,3% to 14% and became the 4th position in Remove the article
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expenses
. Additionally
, expenditures on health care practically doubled over the whole period from just 2,4% to 4,5%.Submitted by alieksdandr on
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