The chart below shows how much money is spent in the budget on different sectors by the UAE government in 2000.

The chart below shows how much money is spent in the budget on different sectors by the UAE government in 2000.
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The pie chart illustrates the amount of money allotted to various sectors by the government officials of UAE in the year 2000.
Overall
, the country’s budget was allocated significantly to three major departments,
such
as Social Security AED, Health and Personal Social Services AED, and Education AED.
Furthermore
, UAE focused on the Social Security Services of its citizens, whilst other sectors were spent less from the nation’s budget. The three major divisions in UAE consumed over half of the portion of the entire government in the year 2000. The country spent exactly 100
billion
on social security, second to the highest expenditure went to Health and Personal social services, amounting to 53
billion
in the same year, followed by Education which consumed 38
billion
, respectively. The seven remaining sectors had around less than half of the total amount spent in 2000, the lowest cost that the country had to spend on was Transport, amounting to 9
billion
in 2000. Of the seven departments, debt interest and other expenditures were the highest with 23
billion
allotted in each division.
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