human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed while others belive actions can be taken to bring about a change. disscuss both views and gives your opinion.

Knowingly or unknowingly
nature
and
animals
are really getting affected by
the
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human behaviour. Human actions
are
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not only
has
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a nagative
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nagative
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negative
impact on
nature
, but
also
it is damaging our environment. In
this
essay,
i
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am going to discuss
on
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both sides.
Firstly
, people are not taking care of
environment
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the environment
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as much as they need to do it. They are creating pollution because of not
seperating
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separating
wet disposal and dry disposal. Because of that, sometimes
this elastic disposals
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this elastic disposal
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getting
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eaten by
animals
and they end up dying.
In addition
to that, if
this
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disposals are not getting
evalaluated
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evaluated
properly, it ultimately creates chaos in
nature
.
This
is only
the
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one example, but things
such
as cutting trees and using them for income purpose is
also
destructing mother
nature
and creatures. There
are
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multiple
solution
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to
this
, everyone should do some little things in order to improve environmental situations.
Furthermore
, people should divide their disposals
according to
their categories. If we
dispose
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this
well,
then
plants or
surrounding
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the surrounding
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area
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would not get disturbed. Most importantly, everyone should create awareness about all
this
, so that people will get to know about it, ultimately it will lead to and very good impact on
nature
and
animals
.
For instance
,
government
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the government
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should implement zero waste and
plastic free
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plastic-free
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concept
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in every state. To
summerise
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summarise
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, I agree that human activities are really affecting plants and
animals
,
additionally
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it
also
harms our biological diversity and ecosystem. To avoid
this
,
human
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humans
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should start
from
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by
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making small changes in their regular habitat
such
as using polythene bags,
using
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and using
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public transport.
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