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8. Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#communication
In
this
 day and age, communication among individuals plays a crucial role in society’s life.
However
, there is a debate about which method is more
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.Some believe that spoken
language
 is more efficient compared to
the
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written one
while
 others claim that textual communication is superior. I strongly agree with the former view as the amount of
information
 would be easily
understanded
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 with the emotional expressions.
Firstly
, verbal communication involves eye
contacts
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 and facial expressions, making the speech easier for listeners to concentrate
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 well as understand the
information
.
In other words
, individuals in direct interaction could both listen to others and identify their emotions.
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 a survey conducted
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 a university in America, 80% of students revealed that they may comprehend the content shown in a speech rather than the written one. People in a talk can gain and share
information
 in different ways
such
 as
body
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language
, etc.
therefore
, spoken
language
 is
more
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preferable.
Secondly
, there is a lesser chance of ambiguity in oral
language
 than in
the
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written one.
This
 is because the listeners tend to clear their misconceptions which can help them avoid misunderstanding.
For example
, some surveys conducted in America revealed that 80% of teachers use spoken
language
 as a primary teaching method.
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 that way, children can freely have questions in order to clearly understand the lesson
while
 in textual tasks, they would be inactive, developing the wrong concepts and ideas leading to poor grades. In conclusion, I am in
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 of the view that spoken interaction is more important than written handouts since individuals can fully gain
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information
 through various means
such
 as facial expressions, body
language
, etc.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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