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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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Technological advancements have benefitted humans in many aspects of life and especially, and the evolution of the internet has completely reshaped electronic apparatus and made them more handy and intelligent. In many ways, Intelligent
gadgets
 have opened up barrages of information and made it more convenient for everyone.
Although
 Smart devices can bring enormous benefits, they may
also
 bring some serious consequences depending upon their
usage
. Especially, when an easy and open connection is provided to the
children
. Analysing the consequences of smart
gadgets
usage
 in minor's
development
 I come across the idea to limit its access to
children
 to avoid its negative effects. Even though the adoption of smart
gadgets
 has provided leverage to
children
 that previous generations do not have, still there are multiple factors which restrict the excessive
usage
 of smartphones
to
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kids. Providing open access to
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 without parental control may cause multifaceted problems in terms of psychological , social and physical
development
.
For example
, the Process of neurological
development
 may get severely affected
due to
 the excessive
usage
 of smart
gadgets
.
Similarly
, its excessive use may lead to
the
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less social interaction of the scion and
thus
 the scion may not be much exposed to the environment
thus
it
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 can affect the social expansion of the
children
.
In addition
, Physical nourishment which is considered a vital role in the child's advancement would be severely affected as the child will not have any interest in playing sports or any
such
 activities. To put it in a nutshell, excessive and open access to any equipment may produce catastrophic effects. Handing over these devices without any parental control will definitely affect the child's
development
. It's the responsibility of parents to restrain the
usage
 of those
gadgets
 to avoid their negative effects.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • smartphones
  • usage
  • technology
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • entertainment
  • gaming
  • social media
  • communication
  • educational resources
  • addiction
  • dependence
  • negative effects
  • physical health
  • mental health
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