Can teaching profession be taught throught courses ?

Those two years of my life were the most beneficial since I was able to gather so much first-hand experience with kids
as well as
the capacity to convey an effective form of interpretation. I saw many flaws in the education system
that is
now in place in my country, which is why I decided against beginning my career as a teacher there right immediately. I was interested in learning more about different
countries'
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educational systems.
Not to mention
, the UK has one of the
sophisticated
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educational systems in the world.
Hence
, if I were to get accepted into
this
course, I would receive more formal training in how to be a proficient teacher and the procedures to use to bring out the best in students. So, it would be
great
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advantage for me to explore a novel way of
knowledge
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where I can apply all of these strategies to help my students in the future.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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