Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, it has become a common view that

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hold their

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everywhere,

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dinner

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tables

, at schools and even on the streets.

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there are many reasons for

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to become addicted to their phones, I believe it is a negative development in

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society and should be attached more importance

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young generation's phone addiction. First of all,

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like to make phone calls and send text messages to their friends using

smartphones

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, especially teenagers. Kids in their teenage years love to keep in touch with their

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friends

and exchange information, in order to stay close to their

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circles.

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, there are so many things

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can be done using

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as playing mobile games,

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short videos or movies and

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any information people are interested in. Mobile phones have become an essential part of people's daily lives.

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,

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sometimes use

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to escape from their responsibilities,

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, doing homework or exercise.

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the

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of

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among

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seems to be an unstoppable trend, I still believe

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will bring harm to young people, and schools and parents need to take more measures on the phenomenon. It is

obvioust

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obvious

to see that the

imformation

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information

and applications on

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are to provide short-term excitement

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of really useful knowledge. The fun of scrolling never-ending short videos or

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winning scores in mobile games is hard to resist for young

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, which will keep them from focusing on their studies.

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, spending too much time on mobile phones will cause health problems for

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,

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as obesity. What's more, phone

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addiction

will

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prevent kids from making social connections and communicating with their peers, which are key skills for them when they grow up. In conclusion, my opinion on

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's growing

addication

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addiction

to

smartphones

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is negative, and I encourage more steps

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be taken by

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society.