Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages. To what extent do you agree?

There are several ways to gather
people
who are completely different in religion, nationality or region.
Music
is a good choice to glue
people
together even though they have different cultures and ages. From my point of view, I totally agree with
this
statement.
Music
is an index that can represent how the uniqueness of the culture.
For example
, in the football world cup that was held in Brazil, many
people
in other countries were surprised by the opening ceremony's song that was sung by Brazilian and the Brazilian traditional musical instruments that were used in
this
song. Because many
people
have not heard the rhythm like
this
before.
Consequently
, it was popular and spread around the whole world.
Moreover
, from the research,
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human does more likely to memorize vocabulary from
music
than
other
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from other
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media platforms.
Thus
,
music
can use as a learning aid.
For instance
, foreigners who want to learn another language should begin by listening to
music
.
In addition
,
music
is not limited by age. There are still a bunch of teenagers who prefer the
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90s
or country
music
genre
as well as
remaking an old song to a new version.
Furthermore
, many songs are made to connect a relationship
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each other
such
as festive songs like Christmas or new year songs that every family member whether older or younger
have
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to sing along together.
To conclude
,
music
is not only a good tool to create a relationship from internal or external culture but
also
brings
people
of every age together.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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