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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some
people
 argue that
people
 in professional fields should
work
 in their
country
,
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 because they studied there.
While
 others believe that they can have free to
work
 in other
countries
. Both views will be discussed, and I believe that the latter view is more convincing.
To begin
 with, there
are
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 some
reason
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reasons
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 why
professionals
work
 in their
country
.
Firstly
, they have a responsibility to help
people
 in their
countries
. They are provided
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the
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 high quality
of
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training by governments in their
country
, and there are many
people
 who need to solve several problems from them. In
such
 situations, they make a return for nations.
Secondly
,
professionals
 can have better job opportunities. If they finish their study, many companies should suggest they
to
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work
 together. So they can have a chance to get a job easily, and they do not have difficulty finding a workplace.
On the other hand
, if they want, they can go overseas. First of all, they can increase their knowledge and vision. One of the reasons for studying and working abroad is that they can build their career. So if
people
 in
professional
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 field want to go overseas for their career, it has
positive
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 impact on them.
In addition
, there are many developing
countries
 that need help. Developing
countries
 need help to improve and solve their problems
such
 as health problems and so on. If
professionals
 want to go overseas to help poor
people
,
such
countries
 can be developed. Especially,
professionals
 can have unique experiences in their life. In conclusion,
although
 there are some factors why
professionals
work
 in their
country
, the reasons for working aboard are more persuasive.
Thus
, they should be encouraged to
work
 in other
countries
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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