Some educationalists think that international exchange visits will benefit teenagers at the school. To what extend do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Many tutors think that studying abroad will benefit adolescence. It will help the

student

to know

outside

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country

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culture

, language , food and so on which will outweigh the drawbacks. Numerous

student

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will get lots of knowledge by studying

in

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outside school or college.

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with,

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the student

a student

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student

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students

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can meet up with various

type

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types

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of other

country

students and can measure their intelligence by competing with them. They can

also

know about their

culture

and cities.

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, if the

student

admit

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themselves

in

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Australia's

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Australia

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school

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schools

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or

college

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colleges

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,they can learn Australian

culture

as well as

other

country'

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countries'

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s

student

culture

,moral value and

their

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livelihood.

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to

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, by

traveling

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travelling

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another

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country

they can know prominent places which will help their study side.

However

,

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a student

the student

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student

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who

visit

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well education system

country

can bring

good will

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for

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their native

country

.

Besides

, they can change their

country

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bad education system which not only educational development for that

country

but

also

economical development.

Nevertheless

, it has some drawbacks

such

as the

student

feel

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lonely without their family. Sometimes they can forget their own

country

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rules and regulations. Whatever , still my opinion is that

student

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will

benefitted

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more than the disadvantages. In conclusion , most

of

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the

tutor

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prefer to send the

student

for

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study or

traveling

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travel

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in school life because it can enrich their knowledge

on

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various think and can be good for their own

country

. So my point of view is that it has advantages more than disadvantages.