A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. Give detail of the course you took at the University. Explain why you recommend the university. Give some advice about how to apply.

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Dear John, Hope
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letter finds you in the best of health and spirit. I am writing
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letter to give a suggestion related to your studies. Here I would like to give some advice regarding a bachelor's in computer. Because during the course you should know about computer languages, coding and about how to make a presentation effectively. So it is beneficial for the future. Speaking of which, I recommend you enrol on the computer course at oxford
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, London. Because the
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staff is well qualified and teachers teach in a very accurate way.
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, the campus provides proper study materials in class. All in all, I think you should admission to
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because there are various ways to admission like online and personally visiting the
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to fill out the form in the administration office. In end, you will admission to Oxford
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, which is the best decision of yours. Warm wishes, Eva.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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