You recently had your computer fixed at a local computer store, however, you are not pleased with the service you received. Write a letter to the store manager. In the letter: describe the situation; explain why you are dissatisfied; say what you want the manager to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am one of your loyal customers and I always take your
service
for any computer
repair works. However
, this
time I am writing to complain about a
poor customer Correct article usage
the
service
that I received on 20th September from your shop. I really am disappointed with the service
and I hope you will take prompt action after investigating the letter.
A few days ago my computer
showed some anomalies and every few hours, it got restarted automatically. In fact, I didn’t pay much attention to this
issue until the problem became more frequent. So, I took my computer
to your store on 15th September and your customer care officer promised to fix the problem in a day or two. However
, he took a week to call me and when I brought my computer
home, I found that nothing has been done. The restarting problem reappeared as usual while I paid $100 to your shop and waited for one week to have it fixed.
This
is a frustrating and daunting experience that I have had with your service
and I would ask you to investigate the reason for this
poor customer support. Please send someone to my home to have the issue fixed or refund the service
charge that I have already paid for apparently nothing.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Milad RahimiSubmitted by andriykolomiyets12 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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