You are planning to take a vacation. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter Describe the vacation spot you have chosen Explain how you plan to spend your time there Invite your friend to join you on your vacation.
Dear Jenny,
How are you? I am so excited about sharing with you the vacation that I am preparing for my family. We are going to the mountains where there are a lot of outdoor activities.
Basically, we are planning to go to Sapa, a picturesque city which is located in Northern Vietnam and is reputable for its misty mountains and vibrant ethnic minority communities. During the trip, we will stay in a homestay to experience first-hand the unique lifestyle of local people. I believe that it will be a golden opportunity for us to learn about their traditions and customs.
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region is famous for its spectacular views, especially from Fan Xi Pang, the highest mountain in Indochina. We will have a chance to hike to the summit and experience the breathtaking landscape of the surrounding valleys.
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period provides the most pleasant weather with cool temperatures and clear blue skies. I hope that you can join us. It would be an excellent opportunity to escape from the busy life of big cities and immerse ourselves in nature for a few days.
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Lots of love,
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Great job in expressing your plans and inviting your friend in a friendly and engaging tone. Keep up using a variety of sentence structures to maintain the reader's interest.
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