It is believed that individuals who engage in reading books can cultivate greater imagination and linguistic abilities than those who prefer television. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In contemporary society, there are debates about the reading
books
has more benefits compared the watching TV
for nations, specifically in terms of encouraging imagination and linguistic skills. According to
my perspective, I completely agree that books
have more important benefits than television and give more opportunities which community can use for their future life or career. In this
essay, I will explore my opinion and try to draw some conclusions.
Let’s begin with the ops of reading books
, with the help of books
people will be able to develop imagination. But what is imaginative? Termine ‘’imagination’’ is the production of sensations, feelings and thoughts. It is the ability to form pictures in the mind. However
, not everyone’s imagination is well-developed. In order to increase it, people have to read more various types of books
and this
can change the reader’s mind. For instance
, via books
, readers could visualize the scenes, characters, and settings, described in the text. Unlike in television cannot replicate every detail in the text. It is because, shows,
and movies have limited acts.
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Secondly
, reading books
can improve your linguistic language, and writing styles, and expand your vocabulary budget and pronunciation. After reading you can influence others correctly, using various academic words and show yourself to others with educational points. Besides
this
, you have to chance to encourage your creativity, critical skills and communication skills. On the other hand
, on TV
you can find a huge number of TV
shows related to conversational language along with
censorship, which can affect people’s perceptions. For example
, on national television, there are more and more shows associated with terrorism, patriotism, poverty, crimes, violence and the love story of people. The TV
channels linked with nature and education do not exist in my country.
To sum up
, reading books
has many advantages, which can enhance comprehension abilities, also
exposure our fantasy and linguistic fluency.Submitted by shani.menglieva.94 on
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coherence cohesion
Try to avoid typographical and grammatical errors for a cleaner presentation. For example, 'the watching TV' should be corrected to 'watching TV'.
coherence cohesion
Improve the logical flow between sentences and paragraphs. For instance, linking phrases like 'Firstly', 'Secondly', and 'Finally' can help guide the reader through your argument.
task achievement
Ensure that examples provided are relevant and specific. The mention of television shows related to topics like terrorism and crimes should be tied more clearly to the argument.
task achievement
Clarify the definition and importance of terms like 'imagination' more concisely and ensure the paragraph stays focused on the central argument.
coherence cohesion
Provides a clear introduction and conclusion, which frames the argument well.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
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