You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Tell him which team won • Describe the weather conditions that day • Say how you felt about the match

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Dear Sam, I hope you are getting better now. Anyway, I will visit you tomorrow. Just wanted to inform you that our team "NASAR Football club" has won the match.

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, I know that you are curious to know about the contest conclusion Because you were in the hospital at that time and were unable to see our progress during the match. Excited to inform you that we won the competition with 10/9 scores from the "Sheer Football Club". The winning prize has been divided among the team and we

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take out your share. Talking about the weather, It was a sunny day and the temperature was about 38 Degrees celsius. We drank a lot of water during the match because of the huge sweat.

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, the game was very interesting especially

at the end

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while

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required to make only one score to win. Suddenly, our captain took the lead and put the ball

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their court. everybody at the stadium was cheering up. I hope you too enjoyed the situation by

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letter. see you tomorrow. Yours lovingly, Mandeep Singh

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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8 paragraphs

182 words

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These days people spend more and more time at work and less time at home. What are advantages and disadvantages of this?

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Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?

Some people dislike change in their sociality and their own lives and want things to stay the same. why do some people want things to say the same? why should change be regarded as something positive?