You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Tell him which team won • Describe the weather conditions that day • Say how you felt about the match

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Dear Sam, I hope you are getting better now. Anyway, I will visit you tomorrow. Just wanted to inform you that our team "NASAR Football club" has won the match.

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, I know that you are curious to know about the contest conclusion Because you were in the hospital at that time and were unable to see our progress during the match. Excited to inform you that we won the competition with 10/9 scores from the "Sheer Football Club". The winning prize has been divided among the team and we

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take out your share. Talking about the weather, It was a sunny day and the temperature was about 38 Degrees celsius. We drank a lot of water during the match because of the huge sweat.

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, the game was very interesting especially

at the end

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while

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required to make only one score to win. Suddenly, our captain took the lead and put the ball

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their court. everybody at the stadium was cheering up. I hope you too enjoyed the situation by

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letter. see you tomorrow. Yours lovingly, Mandeep Singh

mandeepsinghsony2022Mon Feb 27 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

182 words

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You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Tell him which team won • Describe the weather conditions that day • Say how you felt about the match

Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems. To what extend do you agree?

It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many young people leave their own countries to work abroad. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working abroad and give your own opinion

Some people say that what individuals do to protect cannot make difference, others say that individuals can protect environment. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

Today there is increasing concern over environmental problems. While some people believe taht they must be solved on a domestic level, others think that only through international cooperation can environment issues be dealt with. Discuss both views and give yoru opinion.