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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

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In these recent years, people debate that scientists and medical
use
 of
animals
 as a tester of medication are unlawful, but from the experiments and
test
 the professionals activational received more information and
results
 from the
test
 that has been done. From a personal view, I do not agree that professionals do not have other
ways
 to
test
 their products. In the following paragraphs, I will explain my views towards the claim above. First of all, the
use
 of animal for experiment purposes do give
researchers
 and scientists more accurate
results
 than other forms of a
test
.
For example
, the chemical
that is
 implemented in the animal's skin will have reactions towards the chemical. The researcher could take the
results
 and do
further
 study and research.
This
 could help
researchers
 get instant
results
 and do amendments
according to
 their reactions.
This
 could help
researchers
 and scientists to get the chain reaction quickly and more effectively.
However
, there are alternative
ways
 to do tests and experiments. As technology becomes more advance and ever. The tester could
use
 a computer to get the
results
 rather than using living creatures. Other than that they can do it in more natural
ways
 without using that many chemicals because chemicals and acids are the ingredients that would kill living creatures.
In contrast
, both of these
ways
 will be more environmentally friendly
as well as
 reduce the
use
 of
animals
 for experimental purposes.
To sum up
, using
animals
 for testing and experiment does bring some benefits to society, but testers and
researchers
 should take advantage of technology and natural resources to produce their products. I still do not agree that using
animals
 is the linear way for experimental purposes, there are other alternative
ways
 to do the tests.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • scientific breakthroughs
  • ethical concerns
  • alternatives
  • animal testing
  • moral implications
  • ethical considerations
  • vivisection
  • research methods
  • ethical dilemmas
  • animal welfare
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