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began and it become worse nowadays. developing countries have become one of the most crucial

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problem. to start with, many developing countries are focusing on

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their nation grow. they usually create a ton of different types of

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their needs or even import for

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an awful

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condition.

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to reduce global warming. the world

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forest restoration in many

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such

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, and many other countries.

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oxygen and reduce the danger of global warming.

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produce a lot of carbon.

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will damage the ozone.

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, global warming is a serious

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as fast as possible.

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might be one of the biggest

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but we cannot forbid them from doing what they do,

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we have other solutions

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to reduce

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