Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.

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has been the most drastic

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for many years in many countries. There are those who advocate for the

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penalty

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for those guilty persons of violent

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and those who believe that capital

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is not an acceptable practice in modern society.

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with, advocates of

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for violent offenders often support the idea that, it is a just

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for those who have committed the most horrible acts.

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, they argue that it serves as a discouragement for others who might commit

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acts,

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prevents major

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.

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, it restores

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of justice and lessens expenses on

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of prisoners.

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, in ancient times, people were gathered in the centre of their town to see how a criminal was killed, with the purpose that others will understand not to commit

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anymore.

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, opponents of

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argue that it is an inhumane

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and it is unbearable. It is

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argued that the

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is expensive and it does not necessarily reduce the crime rate. In my opinion,

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should not be accepted in contemporary society.

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, other forms of

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should be explored.

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, life imprisonment would allow

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money, because it is cheaper to keep an offender in prison than to kill him and

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protect innocent individuals from other

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.

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, I strongly believe that,

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should be excluded from prisoners’ punishments

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because no one has the right to kill other

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and even ,criminals, deserve a second chance and innocent people can be killed because of unfair sentences.