Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.

In general, the

death

penalty

has been the most drastic

punishment

for many years in many countries. There are those who advocate for the

death

penalty

for those guilty persons of violent

crimes

and those who believe that capital

punishment

is not an acceptable practice in modern society.

To begin

with, advocates of

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for violent offenders often support the idea that, it is a just

punishment

for those who have committed the most horrible acts.

Furthermore

, they argue that it serves as a discouragement for others who might commit

such

acts,

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prevents major

crimes

.

In addition

, it restores

equilibrium

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of justice and lessens expenses on

maintenance

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of prisoners.

For example

, in ancient times, people were gathered in the centre of their town to see how a criminal was killed, with the purpose that others will understand not to commit

crimes

anymore.

On the other hand

, opponents of

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argue that it is an inhumane

punishment

and it is unbearable. It is

also

argued that the

death

penalty

is expensive and it does not necessarily reduce the crime rate. In my opinion,

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should not be accepted in contemporary society.

Thus

, other forms of

punishment

should be explored.

For example

, life imprisonment would allow

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money, because it is cheaper to keep an offender in prison than to kill him and

also

protect innocent individuals from other

crimes

.

To conclude

, I strongly believe that,

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should be excluded from prisoners’ punishments

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because no one has the right to kill other

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and even ,criminals, deserve a second chance and innocent people can be killed because of unfair sentences.