In many countries, city planners locate offices, schools, homes and shops in certain areas so that they are seperated by distance. Do you think the advantages of this practice outweigh the disadvantages?

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Urban planners in most nations around the globe are promoting
city
designs where accommodations, learning institutions, stores and office blocks are located in specific
areas
at a distance from other parts of the metropolis.
Although
this
can lead to increased traffic jams in
such
areas
, I believe that the merits of
this
arrangement prevail over the noted setback as it encourages concentration and helps in organizing the cities. Increased road congestion is a major demerit of siting organizations
such
as
offices
or
schools
in specific parts of a metropolis.
This
is because during peak periods a lot of people head towards that particular part of the town.
Consequently
, they will be car hold-ups leading to a waste of time and accidents.
For example
, cities all over the world experience traffic jams in
areas
where
schools
are located during the morning hours and after closing , as parents converge to drop off or pick up their kids.
However
, I believe
this
is a bearable setback when compared to the enormous benefits of
this
arrangement.
Nonetheless
, there are several pros to the mentioned
city
design.
Firstly
, it allows for uniformity, which in turn aid in the
overall
proper setup of the town.
That is
to say that, when stores are sited in a particular part of a
city
, it enables shoppers to easily locate what they want to buy.
Secondly
, having
schools
in an area a distance from where stores and
offices
are sited will ensure that the students remain focused. By having
such
arrangements, we are assured that the noise and fanfare that surrounds shopping malls and
offices
will not distract the students.
For example
, most
schools
in Japan are sited far from
offices
and malls, and Japan's Ministry of Education believes that it is the main reason why their education system is hugely successful.
Therefore
, I believe that the pros as mentioned far outweigh any perceived demerit. In conclusion,
although
having
offices
,
schools
, people's homes and shops in certain
areas
within a
city
can lead to traffic congestion, I think that the advantage of allowing students to learn without distractions and the
overall
organisation of the
city
far outweigh the setback.
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