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should children be allowed to make their own decisions. discuss both views and express an opinion

#children #decisions
children
 should be allowed to make their
decision
 in some matters. but based on their
desicion
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decision
mistashould
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mist should
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there
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their
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guardian
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 surroundings so that their guardian
are
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also
 aware that
if
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the
decision
 that they are making
are
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 good and based on some relevance not out of some silly
infuence
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influence
.
This
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merits
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the merits
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 and demerits on should
children
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the decision
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 themselves.
Initially
, It will be
benificial
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beneficial
 to allow
children
 to make
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the decision
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decision
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decisions
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 themselves
,
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 so that
they
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the
children
 make
mistakes
 and learn from them. In
many
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much
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 psychological
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pieces of evidence
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 it is been
proves
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proven
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 that
children
 learn from
there
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mistakes
 and
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improve
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 themselves by observing how
an
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 habit and
curosity
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curiosity
 affect them.
Secondly
, Human evolution is based on doing
mistakes
,
obervation
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observation
 and improvisation, it can
also
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 as how a baby
learn
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 how a walk. A baby tries
thousands
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 times,
make
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makes
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mistakes
 and
improve
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improves
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 himself, and
learn
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learns
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walking
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.
Similarly
, riding
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a bicycle
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 and many
ither
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other
 things.
However
, Allowing
children
make
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decision
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a decision
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 and
also
 turn into chaos and destroys a child's life
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, for instance,
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for instance
children
 and drugs, In 2013 a survey proves that out of 1000 students
aboves
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above
 75 students becomes
a
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prey
of
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 drug abuse and
in
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further
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participate
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 in crimes.
Similarly
, In 2015 several studies on teenagers proves that
,
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 several
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students
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 becomes addicted to adult videos or porn
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content
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, leading to
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a low
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 fertility rate in
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 later stages of life, which is
also
 a proven cause of anxiety and depression. Allowing
children
 in making
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a decision
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decision
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decisions
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 can be a boon and a curse.
therefore
children
 should be allowed to make
desicion
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decisions
decision
 on their own but under supervision. And if a
children
 make
mistake
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mistakes
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guadian
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guardian
 should make them aware that they are making a mistake.
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