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The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph above illustrates the proportion of
people
 in the UK,
that is
 over 4 years old, who watched television and listened to the
radio
 daily in 1992 during the course of 2 months, October to December.
Overall
, when the percentage of
people
 that watched
televisions
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television
show examples
 rose the number of
people
 that listened to the
radio
 declined. The only time when the number of
people
 that used televisions and
radio
 are equal was around 1pm. We can see on the graph that
in
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at
show examples
 the beginning of the day, at 6am, nobody used television but about 17%
the
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of the
show examples
 UK population listened to the
radio
.There was a massive difference, about 11%, at about 9am when
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the percentage
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 of
people
 reached its highest for
radio
, approximately 28%
whereas
 the number of
people
 that were watching television was slowly dropping down from 17% at the same time. At about 8pm, the proportion of
people
 who were watching
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