Some people think it is important to construct new buildings rather than wasting money on maintaining old ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people believe that investing in new
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is more beneficial than spending money on maintaining old
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. I disagree with
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stance because saving historical architecture has cultural value and renovating existing
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can often be more economical than building new ones.
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, old
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often have historical and cultural significance that cannot be replaced by modern
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. They serve as a physical reminder of a city’s past, reflecting the architectural styles, traditions, and events of earlier times.
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, cities like Rome or Kyoto attract millions of tourists each year because of their preserved ancient
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and temples. Destroying
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structures
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means erasing important parts of human history.
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, renovating existing
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is often more economical than constructing entirely new ones. Reusing old materials and
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reduces waste and lowers the demand for new resources which helps to minimize the impact on the environment.
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, many European cities follow a policy of restoration rather than demolition because renovation of old homes tends to cost less and produces fewer carbon emissions than building modern replacements. In conclusion, I strongly believe that maintaining old
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is a better approach than replacing them with new constructions. Preserving historical monuments enriches our cultural identity and can
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be a practical and eco-friendly solution in terms of cost and environmental friendliness

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Ensure that your main arguments are more thoroughly supported with additional details or examples to enhance your points.
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Consider improving the flow between some ideas in your paragraphs for smoother transitions and overall coherence.
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Your introduction clearly states your position and sets the stage for your arguments.
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You provide solid examples, such as Rome and Kyoto, that effectively support your points about historical significance.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • heritage preservation
  • environmental sustainability
  • carbon footprint
  • architectural integrity
  • cultural significance
  • retrofitting
  • economic considerations
  • modern infrastructure
  • urban development
  • historical landmark
  • construction costs
  • energy efficiency
  • community identity
  • adaptive reuse
  • sustainable development
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