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The graph below shows the qatari import totals( in tons) for several types of vegetables from 1980 to 2020.

The graph below shows the qatari import totals( in tons) for several types of vegetables from 1980 to 2020.
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The table illustrates information about
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 import
for
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 five various vegetables. The data
measured
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 in tones for a 4-decade starting from 1980.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 all patterns increased except Ginger until
final
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 year.
However
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 the same figure
pf
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of
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 spinach
followwed
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followed
downward
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 trend. Looking at the details, the quantity of spinach was 500 in the first year. After
that
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this
 figure experienced dramatically decrease to reach the low of 350 in the final year. Remarkably, the figure
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 ginger rose by 60 between 2 decades to reach the highest point at 310 in 2000.
Then
 fell to 260 in the final of the period shown. Turning to
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the quantity
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 of peas, ut stagnated between 1980 and 2000, which was followed by a
slightly
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by
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 20 in 2020. The pattern of garlic started with 300 in 1980,and equalize to 400 in the final
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period
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the period
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 shown. The quantity of broccoli, increased by 100 from 200 (in 1980)
till
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 300 (in 2020).
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