Nowadays more and more people are choosing to do online shopping. What are the advanatages and disadvantages of this?
Nowadays a lot of people are preferring to do online shopping. There are a number of advantages and disadvantages of
this
development.
On the one hand , doing online shopping has a lot of advantages. Linking Words
For
Linking Words
Use synonyms
example
it is Add a comma
,example
too
good way to save Add an article
a too
our
time , I mean we do not Correct pronoun usage
apply
to
need to go Change the verb form
apply
bazar
or Correct your spelling
bazaar
walking
in Wrong verb form
walk
Correct article usage
the bazar
bazar
or shopping Correct your spelling
bazaar
centers
to find what we want. Change the spelling
centres
Second
advantage is that Change the article
The second
in
online shopping has Change preposition
apply
range
of stylish Add an article
a range
clothes
or popular brands’ products . Use synonyms
For
Linking Words
example
, the Use synonyms
clothes
Use synonyms
on
online stores are better than the Change preposition
in
clothes
sell in Use synonyms
bazar
. Correct your spelling
bazaar
Linking Words
Finally
Add a comma
,Finally
on
online Change preposition
in
magazines
you can find fashionable Add a comma
,magazines
clothes
. When brands make Use synonyms
new
Add an article
a new
type
of Fix the agreement mistake
types
clothes
Use synonyms
the
first they sell Correct article usage
apply
this
Linking Words
on
online. On websites or in social Change preposition
apply
medias
Correct your spelling
media
after
Linking Words
Linking Words
this
they sent to stores.
On the one hand , Add a comma
,this
do
online shopping can make some problems that when you have got on it can not suit you. Unnecessary verb
apply
For
Linking Words
example
: Use synonyms
problem
with Add an article
the problem
a problem
color
does not match you and sometimes when you get Change the spelling
colour
clothes
it can not Use synonyms
be
similar Unnecessary verb
apply
the
picture you saw Change preposition
to the
in
social media. Another primary disadvantage Change preposition
on
it
is Correct pronoun usage
apply
size
. Use synonyms
Usually
people choose Add a comma
,Usually
wrong
Change the article
the wrong
size
and Use synonyms
this
is not fit them . Linking Words
For
Linking Words
Use synonyms
example
when you buy something from another country Add a comma
,example
size
can change and if you chose another Use synonyms
size
when you get it , it can be bigger or smaller for you . Use synonyms
Finally
, it is delivery . Linking Words
This
is too very Linking Words
commonly
problem because Replace the word
common
during
the way some Change preposition
along
clothes
can lose and you can do nothing.
Use synonyms
To conclude
, both sides have advantages and disadvantages but Linking Words
Linking Words
nevertheless
people are Add a comma
,nevertheless
continuing
do online shopping .Add the particle
tocontinuing
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite