The maps below show the center of a small town called Birshire as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The provided maps represent the difference between the present Berkshire town and the town after planned improvements.

Overall

, what stands out from the maps is that Birshire will be undergone some dramatic change from a rural town to an urban area in the future,

although

there will be more residential areas and roads.

However

, farms will be decreased,

while

a recreational centre will be constructed.

Firstly

, in the top right of the plan, Griffiths's farm will be removed, and a supermarket will be built.

Moreover

, the hooligan farm, which is in the centre right of the chart will be transformed into a car part.

Whereas

, the farmer's market located beside corbie road will no longer be in the future.

Furthermore

, there will be a roundabout at the intersection of Megoldrick and That street, and Corbie road will be expanded beyond That street. The open field situated in the bottom right corner will be used for the sports centre.

In addition

, the shops will be knocked down, and more houses will be constructed.

Nevertheless

,the public park remained unchanged.

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