Some people say that every human being can create art. Others think only the people born with the ability can create art. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Some people claimed that artistic ability is inborn

talent

whereas

, others say everyone can perform that creativity by learning. I believe that

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a

talent

can be a combination of both, inborn and acquired. In

this

essay, I will discuss both views and give explanations. On the one hand, a

talent

of creativity came with birth and these people gifted it from nature.

Furthermore

, someone of age 2-5 old perform their

talent

without any training or hard practising but it is really attractive. Indeed, those who have present the

skills

, people force to believe

that is

a natural ability and that extraordinary things come from

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gene

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.

For instance

, in children's reality shows, small performers' talents and capabilities are unbelievable.

Therefore

, someone has inborn creativity and

skills

.

On the other hand

, someone acquired the

skills

by training, practising and hard working.

Moreover

, an individual who needs to learn and gain

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ability, they are put more commitment to reaching the target.

For example

, some popular artists did not do any painting or sculpturing in their childhood but, they developed the

skills

by learning and became famous in the world. So, training and

continuing

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practice will help to sharpen the

skills

of art. In conclusion, the capabilities of art come up

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born and they developed the

skills

for

further

achievements. In my opinion, to reach the desired level person

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to work hard and continued

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Nevertheless

, knack one may need less effort to reach the goal and easily go beyond by

polish

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their

skills

.

However

, without sufficient practice

any one

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cannot attain

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level even

they

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are

expertise

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in the

feild

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field

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