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It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media-rich society.

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In
this
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 modern era, being persuaded by the
media
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 is something that
people
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 cannot avoid but
people
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 still can manage the
impact
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 of that. Some
people
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 argue that
media
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 has an enormous
impact
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 both positive and negative on human daily life.
This
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 essay will discuss what are the benefits and drawbacks that provided by
media
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. By using
media
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,
people
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 can get and update
information
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 easily. There are many kinds of
media
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, newspapers, magazines, and TV is some examples.
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, some
people
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 who are busy and do not have time to keep up-to-date about recent news can access
information
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 easily from that platform.
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, if they cannot follow live reports for certain news, they will find that on the online
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 platform. Another benefit of
media
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 is some artists use that platform to sell and
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 get feedback from
people
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 randomly. In
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 case,
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, they can use the feedback as motivation to be more creative. It is more positive than the artist only showing their artwork on exhibition with limited visitors.
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, there are
also
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 some negative effects provided by
media
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. Many
people
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 today can confess as professionals based on knowledge or
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 that they get from unreliable sources.
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, some
people
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 can practice as a therapist and sell their services illegally even though they never follow any kind of massage training. Another drawback of
media
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 is there is a lot of unreliable
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 provided by unrespect
media
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.
As a result
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,
people
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 will confuse about the real
information
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 that they get before sharing it with others and it is possible to increase the number of untruthful sources.
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, even though the
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 growing rapidly and show some positive
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 on human life, it
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 can provide negativity. The
impact
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 of
media
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 itself actually cannot be avoided but
people
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 can manage in what way they use and get from it.
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