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In the past , lectures where used as a way of teaching large number of students, but now with the development of technology for education , many people think that there is no justification for attending lectures to what extend do you agree or disagree.

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With the advent of
technology
 it has become easier for
students
 to gather information about anything they want .so, it has become
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necessity for
students
 to attend tutorials for
the
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 studies.
However
, I partly agree with
this
 opinion because both
technology
 and lectures play a significant role in studies. On the one hand,
technology
 is assisting scholars
together
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 information about anything related to their studies, which they can
use
it
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for educating
ithemselves
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themselves
 rather than attending a lecture.
For example
 , there are so many applications like Wikipedia where
students
 can acquire knowledge about different topics which they can
use
 in their higher education. In ,addition using
technology
 a person can
also
 acquire
kind
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 of topic at any time and it can
also
 save time and money , which day spent on travelling to attend
lecture
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the lecture
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.
For instance
, during the
pandemic
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 most undergraduates
use
 applications like zoom which helps them to attend
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a lecture
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lecture
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at
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 their comfort zone.
On the other hand
, several benefits that
students
 can get by attending lectures.
Firstly
,
while
 attending class
student
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 can ask doubts about different topics which
technology
 cannot even answer because of experiences they have from life and books.
Moreover
, tutors can
also
helps
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 scholars , if they face any difficulties
while
 attending tutorials so that they can provide necessary solutions to the problem.
Besides
, rather than common topics like physics or maths teachers can
also
 teach some social skills like art forms which they can
use
 in their day-to-day life
To conclude
, I think that
educating
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 using
technology
 is not easier for
students
 because it provides a lot of benefits but I
also
 assume that attending lectures is
also
 important ,
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provide
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 a
lot
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 advantages as same as
technology
.
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