Some people think that money is the best gift to give to youngster while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In modern days giving

gifts

has become

a

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common on every

events

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. It is always challenging to choose

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an apropriate

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apropriate

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appropriate

gift

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gifts

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for

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an adolescent

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adolescent

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and to relieve

this adults

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this adult

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frequently

gift

a

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money

. Some people

arguing

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that

money

as a

gift

can have

detrimental

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a detrimental

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effect

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,

while

others believe that it is the best

gift

. In

this

essay

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I will explore both

viewpoint

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and provide the

opnion

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opinion

option

on the matter. First and foremost those who support the idea of giving

money

as a

gift

believe that it is beneficial in the shaping

of

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character

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the character

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of

teenagares

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teenagers

.

Money

provide

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them

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the

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sense

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a sense

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of independence and they can acquire the ability to manage their finance.

Moreover

on gifted

money

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,money

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youngsters can afford

themselve

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themselves

to buy whatever they like and it means that they

more

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are more

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likile

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likely

like

can be satisfied by

this

type of

gift

.

For

instance

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i

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I

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always like to receive

gifts

by

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with

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money

because

i

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I

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can choose

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a gift

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gift

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gifts

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by

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on

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my own and it made me always glad.

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hand

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there are those who disagree and believe that

gifts

as

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such as

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money

can have

detrimental

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a detrimental

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effect

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effects

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. Nowadays

advertisment

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advertisement

have

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has

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significant

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influence on children's

behavior

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,

therefore

they can spend gifted

money

on junk food or high sugar drinks and other useless goods which can lead to obesity and some stomach diseases.

This

problem can be solved by giving

for

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youngsters developing

gifts

such

as books or

creativity

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board games.

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example

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i

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I

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gifted

to

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my son a ball with which he played

a

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football in the yard and it caused to do him more outdoor

activity

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activities

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which is useful for him. In conclusion, in my

opinion

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both

of

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views have their own benefits and it is crucial to strike a balance when giving

gifts

to teenagers.

While

money

can provide a sense of independence and be saved for future purposes, it lacks the emotional and sentimental value that tangible

gifts

provide.