Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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There have been different views about how
crime
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should be punished. Some people believe that it is better to have a fixed
punishment
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for all kinds of
crimes
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. Some others, including me, claim that each
crime
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should have a different
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as it may commit under different circumstances and with different intentions. Fixed
punishment
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, on the one hand, can prevent any corruption within the legal system, which can affect the
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given. In a corrupt system, money and influence may decide which cases are prioritized or dismissed.
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, perpetrators may get away unpunished
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victims are left with no answer or justice.
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, fix
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can be more deterrent when people know the exact consequences because more people are ignorant about the type of
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they commit and their results.
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, all of those can be reduced by training.
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, judicial personnel should be adequately trained and receive fair salaries to make them less vulnerable to bribery.
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, the government can set up some programs to increase society's awareness of the justice system.
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, not all
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are committed under the same circumstances.
Punishment
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should fit the
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and some factors like poverty, mental health, and intention should be taken into account.
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, a person committing a violent felony with a clear intention should not receive the same
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as someone acting in self-defence.
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, the flexibility of
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may decrease the rate of violent
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, as a violent felony does not receive the same
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as a petty
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.
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, drug traffickers may bring more drugs if there is a fixed
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because they believe that they will receive the same
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for each amount of drug, so they prefer to bring more. In conclusion,
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fixed
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has many benefits,
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as preventing corruption, or it may be more deterrent, I believe that it is better to judge each
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by its circumstances, which may decrease the rate of violent
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fixed punishments
  • consistency
  • predictability
  • deter crime
  • potential offenders
  • streamline
  • judicial process
  • bias
  • corruption
  • complexity
  • human behavior
  • circumstances
  • justice system
  • intent
  • remorse
  • socio-economic background
  • rehabilitate offenders
  • recidivism rates
  • flexible punishment systems
  • inconsistencies
  • perceived injustices
  • public trust
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