You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe why you are having the party Give directions on how to get to the venue Suggest how you can accommodate him/her You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Mansour , I hope you are doing well. I missed you so much. I'm writing to invite you to my

party

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next week.

Firstly

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, As you know

last

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year was hard for me and I faced trouble. So I decided to do a

party

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to have fun and see friends like you. Maybe you are asking yourself how I will get there and when the

party

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will start, do not worry my friends I will tell you about everything.

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, the

party

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will take place next week on Sunday at 9 PM in Hail City. You can get there by car if you want or by train which will take you about 2 hours.

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, There are many hotels you can go to, but I think you should go to BVQ Hotel because it has good prices and great services. I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Best regards , Hamed

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Task Achievement

Try to include a more specific reason for having the party or details about the activities planned to enhance the invitation's appeal.

Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph has one main idea to improve clarity and flow. For example, consider separating the directions from the accommodation suggestions for better organization.

Tone

The letter maintains a warm and friendly tone throughout, which is appropriate for inviting a friend.

Task Achievement

You provided clear instructions on how to get to the venue, which is helpful for the recipient.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

152 words

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You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe why you are having the party Give directions on how to get to the venue Suggest how you can accommodate him/her You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Some people think that genetically modified (GM) crops are a positive development. Others, however, argue that they are potentially dangerous. Discuss both these views andgive your own opinion.

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The tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies rather than on positive developments is harmful to the individuals and the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed rather than to work for a company or organization. What might be the cases? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?