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It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media-rich society

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In recent times, the use of social
media
 has increased significantly
due to
 the advancement of technology and in ,turn it has affected our day-to-day activities and our lives generally.
This
 essay will discuss the pros and cons of the influence of the news. The presence of the
media
 in our society has benefited the
community
 by providing people with up-to-date
information
 needed in all sectors of life.
For Instance
, a piece of
information
 about a foreseen scarcity of water and the necessary measures put in place to combat the scarcity.
This
information
 cut across every sector of the
community
 and
media
 helps to ensure the proper dissemination of
this
information
.
Also
, the
media
 has provided various channels for relieving stress
such
 as comedies, games, chatting sites, movies , and radio and television programs that can easily be assessed by
members
 of society.
On the other hand
, the
media
 has
also
 exposed the
members
 of the
community
 to harm in cases where wrong
information
 was disseminated by the
media
 leading to chaos .
For example
, there have been reported cases of
community
members
 fighting and killing themselves because of false
information
 about a tribal argument occurring in a nearby town which was misunderstood.
In addition
, people often get carried away when watching things on social
media
 and
this
 has led to various forms of domestic and road accidents.
For example
, someone watching something on social
media
 on his or her phone
while
 walking on the road but didn't pay attention to the traffic light and was hit by a car. In conclusion, a
media
-rich society has various advantages for
members
 of the
community
 by providing them with the
information
 needed at various points in time.
However
, caution should be taken when using our devices and
members
 of the
community
 should avoid disseminating Wrong or unconfirmed
information
 via social
media
.
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