In many countries, truancy * is a worrying problem for both parents and educators. What are the causes of truancy, and what may be the effects on the child and the wider community? (* truancy = the situation when a child pretends to go to school but in fact goes somewhere else, for example to play unsupervised. The verb is ‘to play truant from school.’)

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Truancy
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is typically when a child skips
school
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and goes
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with the knowledge of the
parents
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. The increasing rate of
truancy
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in most countries has become a challenge for
parents
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and educators. I will explain why
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truant from
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and the effect of
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truancy
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on the child and community.
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, peer pressure is one of the main reasons why minors play truant from
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,
however
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most
children
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copy blindly or
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easily influenced by
bad
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behavior
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of their peers.
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, in Ghana,
children
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are influenced by their friends who skip
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after sharing their experiences in game
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etc.
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, one other reason is the
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's lack of responsibility to check attendance in order to call the child’s guardian for an answer
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the minor is absent.
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, most schools in Ghana do not call
parents
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to find out why the child skipped
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although
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the attendance proves the student did not attend class.
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with,
truancy
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can have a massive impact on young people's lives,
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ruining
children
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's education which results in
school
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drop out
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. Minors who
dropout
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drop out
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of
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usually engage themselves in criminal activities
such
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as theft.
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, the majority of convicted criminals in Ghana are
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dropouts.
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, most countries in Africa suffer
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consequences when
truancy
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is on a rise. As young people are engaged in criminal activities
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as theft and drugs
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of
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dropout
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, the country invests a great amount of money
on
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healthcare and the justice system rather than investing in infrastructures.
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, the government spends so much on rehab and medication to help reform drug addicts. In conclusion,
truancy
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has raised much concern among
parents
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and educators,
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, it has a great negative effect on both the minor and community as a whole.
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, peer pressure and
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lacking accountability
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led to
truancy
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which has increased the country’s expenditure and crime among
children
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.
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