The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
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The line graph illustrates how many
tourists
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visit a particular Caribbean
island
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in two ways from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the total of travellers visiting a Caribbean
island
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significantly rose over
this
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period. Despite
this
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, both visiting by cruise ships and staying on the
island
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had undergone a steady increase over these 7 years. We can see that the total
number
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of
tourists
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went up from 1
million
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to 3.5
million
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between 2010 and 2017.
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, there was a surge of almost 1
million
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people
at the end
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of
this
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period.
According to
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visitors
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taking cruise ships, maintained above 1
million
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people in
beginning
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the beginning
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time from 2010 to 2011.
Also
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, there was an increase of half a
million
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visitors
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taking cruise ships and steadily maintained at 1.5
million
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visitors
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until 2017, and
then
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there was a slight drop from 1.5
million
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to 1.25
million
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in 2016. It is easy to see that the
number
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of
tourists
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staying on the
island
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fluctuated and rose from above 0.5
million
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visitors
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in 2010.
Then
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, the
number
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of
tourists
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staying on the
island
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steadily went up by around 2
million
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visitors
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during
this
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time and became the highest
number
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of
visitors
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in 2017.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, island, number, million, visitors with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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