The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The line graph illustrates how many
tourists
visit a particular Caribbean island
in two ways from 2010 to 2017. Overall
, it is clear that
the total of travellers visiting a Caribbean island
significantly rose over this
period. Despite this
, both visiting by cruise ships and staying on the island
had undergone a steady increase over these 7 years.
We can see that the total number
of tourists
went up from 1 million
to 3.5 million
between 2010 and 2017. Additionally
, there was a surge of almost 1 million
people at the end
of this
period.
According to
visitors
taking cruise ships, maintained above 1 million
people in beginning
time from 2010 to 2011. Correct article usage
the beginning
Also
, there was an increase of half a million
visitors
taking cruise ships and steadily maintained at 1.5 million
visitors
until 2017, and then
there was a slight drop from 1.5 million
to 1.25 million
in 2016.
It is easy to see that the number
of tourists
staying on the island
fluctuated and rose from above 0.5 million
visitors
in 2010. Then
, the number
of tourists
staying on the island
steadily went up by around 2 million
visitors
during this
time and became the highest number
of visitors
in 2017.Submitted by jackson05234 on
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