the diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea
The diagram illustrates two different methods of producing black
tea
which are
traditional and modernChange the verb form
is
Correct pronoun usage
apply
one
. Overall
, despite the fact that there are 2 ways of manufacturing, they have the same number of stages which is 5. The first one
is picking fresh tea
leaves and the last
one
is adding flavours and aromas.
The process starts with collecting fresh tea
leaves but only bud or top leaves are picked for a good quality tea
. Then
products move to the next step
withering where air passed through leaves on a rack, moreover
, during this
stage
approximately 60 % of the moisture is gone. For the third stage
there are two ways, like the first Add a comma
,stage
one
is the traditional method (loose tea
) which is named rolling where leaves are rolled back and broken, which leads to enzymes reales from the leaves . The second variant of the third step
is the modern method (tea
bags) which is named cutting during this
stage
leaves got cut, torn and curled. In addition
, the contemporary method is a quicker process that allows to create
Replace the word
creation
smaller
granular pieces.
The fourth Change preposition
of smaller
step
is oxidation or fermentation (rolled leaves spread on tiles or cement) during which enzymes plus air make leaves change to copper colour. The last
step
is firing or drying where leaves come in an oven or hot air dryers
, Fix the agreement mistake
dryer
therefore
, during this
stage
almost 97 % of the moisture is gone. Likewise
, flavours and aromas are added in that stage
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