Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of put behind the bars To what extend do you agree?

A group of people strongly believe that selective offenders should be engaged in unpaid

community

service

instead

of being captive in jail. I firmly agree with

this

idea because being active in social

works

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will help

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criminals

to adjust

with

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the

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society

afterward

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afterwards

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of

punishment

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the punishment

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period.

Also

, it will bring economic benefits

for

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the government.

Firstly

, most

criminals

specially

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teenagers feel

ditached

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detached

from

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society when they return from prison. If minor offenders can be involved in

community

work, it will help them to feel the

intigral

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integral

part of the

socity

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society

.

Also

, general people are prone to avoid

criminals

. Considering

this

, if

criminals

can perform some volunteer

works

for

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society, it will bring some positive change

on

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in

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community

peoples’

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people’s

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perspective

for

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of

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the

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criminals

.

For example

, India has recently released a rule for

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minors

criminals

to take part in different social activities and it has significantly impacted

on

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their

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social communication between

criminals

and the general people.

Secondly

,

government

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the government

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has to pay a large amount of money for different

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community

works

. If

criminals

can be involved in those activities without pay, a huge amount of money can be saved.

Moreover

,

this

fund can be utilized

in

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other purpose

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another purpose

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, or it can be stored as

reseve

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reserve

receive

money for

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future need. For an instance, Sweden engaged all of their minor

criminals

in a road construction

last

year, which helped to save 1 million dollars.

To sum up

, particular offenders ought to be involved in different social

works

, which will undoubtedly bring some profoundly constructive impacts on both

socity

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society

and the

criminals

.